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- Editing wasn’t that good (needed to cut out a few shots)
- The screaming was too long because there were too many shots of Lily screaming (obviously hadn't edited the shots out)
- Lighting wasn’t used well (needed dark lighting in the hostage scene to make it "dingy")
- Parts of the script were used a few times (characters repeated what they said in previous shots and this needs to be edited)
- Needs to be more of a film noir than a horror
- Cut some of the shots shorter
- Explain things more so that it can make more sense to the audience
- Wider variety of different shot types
- Need to put more film noir
- Need shorter shots
- More lighting
- Some shots didn’t make sense such as the screaming shot as it wasn’t continuous and was too long
- Some cuts between shots and dialogue that could be edited a bit closer together so it doesn’t repeat.
- Could have filmed more of the detective to make it more a film noir genre
- Was a very good length and the flashbacks were used effectively.
- Has a clear storyline and flows well.
- The editing between the stalking and bullying shots were done very well.
- The lighting was good overall and used dramatically. You could even make the stalking scene darker for a more eerie feel.
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